Sunday 22 November 2015

QWERTY: THE HISTORY - The beginning of 11-volume story

As the machine boss from the third "Matrix" said: "It is done". I wrote it. The Grand Synopsis-like thingy. I have no faintest idea how to do this stuff. But whatever it is, it is ready. And I sent off my first submission, too. Whatever the outcome, it presents a certain opportunity, this: I get to give you some serious spoilers about Qwerty. 

Qwerty Seymore; all pictures by GINO


The whole series consists of 11 books, of which six are ready. Another five are in the making and there are well over 250 000 words on all five combined. The story goes a little bananas right about the third book, when the American Agency starts chasing our hero to join them at the age of 16, and Troy Ragliani is hunting him down... But, in order to get you to that point, you need to read the first one.

Cramming my 95 000 words story into one page written in font 10, the outline looks more or less like this:

QWERTY: THE HISTORY (SHORT VERSION)


QWERTY SEYMORE loses his guardian, uncle Matt, and moves in with his only remaining relatives – the Gibble family. He receives a mysterious, leather-bound book from Matthew, entitled “The History”, written in a strange code he cannot read.

In his new home he is the subject of mockery of his cousins, Sebastian and Dolores. Burdened by his aunt Adela with house chores and humiliated by uncle Donald, he meets a girl called Angelina Sandbanks. They immediately become good friends, and her parents take the boy under their wing.

Donald & Adela Gibble. He's an estate agent and she is a witch.

At the same time, he keeps hearing a strange voice, telling him to read the book. He finally does, after being punished severely by his aunt Adela for going to Ange’s birthday party. The book treats of  a strange Cult of the Sun, but the mystery of it remains unsolved.

Soon the school starts; the boy is teased by school bullies, but gains a group of friends, whom he meets regularly in a secret hideout in the park: Lisa, Gemma, Lilly and Jerry. One of his teachers is his neighbour, Mrs Knowleden, who not only makes fun of his unusual name, but also shames the boy in front of the whole class. He argues with her, which results in Mr and Mrs Gibble throwing him out of their house.

Lisa and Gemma

That night the boy goes to Angelina’s house, where he meets John White, uncle Matt’s old friend. Qwerty finds out he has extraordinary skills, such as telekinesis. At first, he does not believe John and Ange’s parents, thinking they are crazy; soon, however, he learns how to use it. John and the Sandbanks family possess the same gifts. The boy also finds out that his parents are alive, but all their memories have been wiped out.

During the gang’s last meeting in the park, Lilly’s older sister, Lesley Bliss, discovers them. This leads to new gossip and trouble at school, as Lilly’s mother does not want her daughter to be friends with a young criminal, as Qwerty has been portrayed. Trying to legalise their meetings, Qwerty and the gang start a history club at school, calling themselves the Brotherhood of Light.

Lilly Bliss

The boy practises his skills. However, his temper becomes a problem when his cousin, Sebastian Gibble, attempts to beat him up (not for the first time); Qwerty almost kills the boy in a struggle, using telekinesis to protect himself. Doubts appear in his mind; the urge to kill was strong and he is afraid of his own talents.

Dolores Gibble

Sebastian Gibble
Soon he falls into a trap, set by his mighty enemy – Asqualor, an elderly, seemingly good-natured man, who attacks him viciously. He barely escapes, but says nothing to anyone, except Ange. She advises him to tell her parents, but the boy refuses, learning teleportation and telepathy in order to protect himself in the future.

At the same time, the school bullies, led by Josh Ferguson, target Qwerty’s friend, Jerry. Qwerty tricks them into revealing their behaviour to Mr Rodman, the headmaster, and they are punished. They swear revenge not to Jerry, but to Qwerty...


"Qwerty: The History" is now available here: 


amazon.com
amazon.co.uk
Kindle (free for Kindle Unlimited)


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